creative enough?

before anyone jumps the wagon, a jellyfish doesn't have a brain. that said.. creative enough or not funny at all? trying to go the extra mile, not just something I make 'cause I find it worthwhile. I could try to up my skills or I just go with a subtle second meaning. I prefer the later, not just 'cause I'm lazy.

edit: this is turning into one of those epic pieces that never ends. I'll have to wrap this up and move on.